This is my first critique, so please pardon if there is anything... off about it.
First off, what caught my eye first was obviously the massive flames shooting from Charizard's mouth. Although I do like the colors that you mixed into it, I see some sloppy, one colored lines on the edge of the fire that doesn't seem to fit the picture. Other than that, nice job on that part.
Another thing that I really liked was the emphasis you used on the shading of different colors. The blue on Charizard's wings look very nice and the shaded areas fit the rest of the space perfectly. Also, the shading on the back of its head and its limbs make a nice contrast to the brighter areas. Good job on that part.
You also did a very nice job on the arms, legs, and tail color wise. The reflection of the flames on Charizard's limbs really add a nice tone to the picture itself. (I really like the flames on its tail. XD)
One thing I noticed was that Charizard's right arm looks a lot shorter than it's left arm. I'm not sure if you were aiming for the right arm to be bent backwards or something to that matter, but still, it looks rather off.
Not a very big thing, but I thought it would be important to draw it up. It's two front fangs seem a bit... off. They look like two white plastic edges jutting out of its snout. If there was a bit more shading and maybe even some color into it with some changes to the overall shape to it, it would've been better.
In all, you did a brilliant job on this illustration of Charizard. Charizard has always been one of my favorite Pokemon and seeing it this well done makes me like it even more. Again, great work on this.
I must saw my favorite part is the wings. the stretch in the skin is so spot on.
razwit, could I also use this photo as the picture for a fake card in a series of pokemon cards made in the style of magic: the gathering? I know you gave permission to Charganium for their project, but I just wanted exclusive permission. thank you!
yes, just credit me as the artist, and don't forget to credit Pokemon and its creators. thanks for asking first! send me a link when you finish with the card.
First off, what caught my eye first was obviously the massive flames shooting from Charizard's mouth. Although I do like the colors that you mixed into it, I see some sloppy, one colored lines on the edge of the fire that doesn't seem to fit the picture. Other than that, nice job on that part.
Another thing that I really liked was the emphasis you used on the shading of different colors. The blue on Charizard's wings look very nice and the shaded areas fit the rest of the space perfectly. Also, the shading on the back of its head and its limbs make a nice contrast to the brighter areas. Good job on that part.
You also did a very nice job on the arms, legs, and tail color wise. The reflection of the flames on Charizard's limbs really add a nice tone to the picture itself. (I really like the flames on its tail. XD)
One thing I noticed was that Charizard's right arm looks a lot shorter than it's left arm. I'm not sure if you were aiming for the right arm to be bent backwards or something to that matter, but still, it looks rather off.
Not a very big thing, but I thought it would be important to draw it up. It's two front fangs seem a bit... off. They look like two white plastic edges jutting out of its snout. If there was a bit more shading and maybe even some color into it with some changes to the overall shape to it, it would've been better.
In all, you did a brilliant job on this illustration of Charizard. Charizard has always been one of my favorite Pokemon and seeing it this well done makes me like it even more. Again, great work on this.
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